I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
You’ve done a stellar job on your post about the Amazon Rainforest. You’ve collected a lot of brilliant facts and it was very interesting to read. I didn’t know there were so many different types of animals in the Amazon. Isn’t it crazy how it accounts for so much of the world’s remaining rainforest!
Did you know that above the Amazon is a river in the sky? It’s made up of clouds but flows just like water. It occurs because of the amount of water evaporated into the air from the rainforest. It’s almost magical. A big tower was constructed to see how it moved.
I would really appreciate if you could please increase the size and boldness of your text to make it easier for your readers to see your hard work.
Do you know any more great Amazon facts? Let me know!
Hello Devon, im Harley from Paroa School. This is a interesting post I didn't know much about the amazon rain forest and the fact that there is sharks in there is surprising. great work.
Kia Ora Devon,
ReplyDeleteYou’ve done a stellar job on your post about the Amazon Rainforest. You’ve collected a lot of brilliant facts and it was very interesting to read. I didn’t know there were so many different types of animals in the Amazon. Isn’t it crazy how it accounts for so much of the world’s remaining rainforest!
Did you know that above the Amazon is a river in the sky? It’s made up of clouds but flows just like water. It occurs because of the amount of water evaporated into the air from the rainforest. It’s almost magical. A big tower was constructed to see how it moved.
I would really appreciate if you could please increase the size and boldness of your text to make it easier for your readers to see your hard work.
Do you know any more great Amazon facts? Let me know!
Hei konā mai,
Shannon
Hello Devon, im Harley from Paroa School. This is a interesting post I didn't know much about the amazon rain forest and the fact that there is sharks in there is surprising. great work.
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