I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Devon, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve done a wonderful job on your profile page about Lorde. Your facts are very insightful and I love how you overlaid the text onto the picture and matched their backgrounds to a colour in the image.
Had you thought about making the text bolder so it can stand out a bit more? It could make the different coloured texts you’ve chosen really pop!
Lorde is one of my favourite artists. She’s doing a brilliant job representing New Zealand and she has a beautiful singing voice. I particularly like her song ‘Green Light’. I can’t help but sing along everytime I hear it. It’s very catchy. What’s your favourite song that you can’t help but jam along to?
Kia Ora Devon, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou’ve done a wonderful job on your profile page about Lorde. Your facts are very insightful and I love how you overlaid the text onto the picture and matched their backgrounds to a colour in the image.
Had you thought about making the text bolder so it can stand out a bit more? It could make the different coloured texts you’ve chosen really pop!
Lorde is one of my favourite artists. She’s doing a brilliant job representing New Zealand and she has a beautiful singing voice. I particularly like her song ‘Green Light’. I can’t help but sing along everytime I hear it. It’s very catchy. What’s your favourite song that you can’t help but jam along to?
Hei konā mai,
Shannon